Dan Vogel wrote:
Now, that would be impressive. Unfortunately, so far as I can determine, none of Dale's word-strings rise to
that level, which is what one would expect if Spalding's Manuscript Story was the basis for the postulated
rewrite called Manuscript Found, which in turn became the historical basis for Rigdon's MS.
An interesting idea, Dan -- but I'm not sure where you heard me say that -- maybe back in the 1980s? It is
certainly not a notion that I am pushing these days. Did Spalding write a pseudo-history in biblical English?
Several people say that he did, including the Pittsburgh publisher to whom he submitted the manuscript (and
to whom his widow tried to re-submit it, after the would-be author's death in 1816). Was that biblical story
titled "Manuscript Found"? I have no idea -- some witnesses gave that title, so perhaps it is the correct one.
Did this much-remembered biblical story build upon the discarded, unfinished, amateurish Oberlin manuscript?
I doubt it --- or if the two stories did have much in common, I'd guess only as much as two Zane Gray novels,
or two Clint Eastwood Italian westerns.
So why do we even bother looking at the Oberlin manuscript? Obviously the answer is, "Because that is all we
have from the man, of sufficient length to make much use of." I think it would be a great mistake for anybody
to simply assume that the lost "Manuscript Found" was a re-write of the Oberlin story. On the other hand, it
seems that Spalding was working with a general theme of trans-oceanic colonizations of the ancient Americas;
and in consequence of that, speculation regarding the origin of the indians and the fate of the "mound-builders."
My guess is that if we took one of Edgar Rice Burroughs' Tarzan novels and compared it to one of his savage
romances without that same character, the overlap in story-line for these two Spalding pseudo-histories might
have been about the same as for the very predictable, limited-theme Burroughs stories.
But then again, I do not know for sure -- that is my best guess, after several years of pondering this stuff.
Instead, what Dale offers us as evidence is based on the weakest definition of term word-string. He has
stretched it to the point of being pointless.
For the zillionth time, Dan -- knock it off! I am not offering evidence that is intended to convince you of anything
other than the fact that
a few researchers may wish to investigate this material in greater depth than I
have. I am
NOT TRYING TO PROVE SOMETHING TO YOU!!! ----- get the message?
My "evidence" says -- "Here is a method by which we can discern those parts of the Book of Mormon mostly likely to have
depended upon a Spalding original text." If you, Dan (or Brent, or whoever) can figure out a better way to
locate and delimit those parts of the Book of Mormon most like Spalding's writings, go ahead and show me. I'll learn from you.
He seems to know this when he explains--
But what if all we found in that old book was "I Nephi...." or "was taught somewhat in all the learning of my father" what then? Could we say that such word strings were significant? Perhaps, if they both occurred on the same
page of that obscure book -- then it would be a significant find. Or, if on that same page, we found all of these word-strings: "I, Nephi, having been born of goodly parents, therefore I was taught somewhat in all the learning
of my father." However, in this last example, no two of the word strings occur in the same sentence in that
obscure book. Would they still be "significant?"
Actually, Dale's examples from the Book of Mormon do not occur on the same page in the Spalding MS, but rather
pages apart.
Let's take a minute and parse your sentence, OK, Dan?
[1] "Dale's examples" ----- now what examples would those be? Certainly not the first line of 1Nephi,
which I never in a million years have said were/are/can be in anything Spalding wrote. I was giving a
simple example of what "word-strings" are, for heaven's sake! [2] "do not occur on the same page" ---
I was making use of a totally fanciful illustration, in order to show what "significance" might entail for
some observers: the example has nothing to do with Spalding! [3] "in the Spalding MS" -- The Oberlin
story has some pages containing many shared word-strings with the Book of Mormon and some pages which do not.
I find such patterns of clustering to be very interesting -- but the clusters do not depend upon the arbitrary
limitation that their contents must all come from a single page of any other source!
If this sort of thing is the best sophism available these days, then the Sophists have truly fallen on hard times!
But I've come to expect this sort of thing from Latter Day Saints and ex-Latter Day Saints. They are a people
typified by limited, concrete literalism, who generally seem unable to work well with abstractions and subtle
analogies. I truly think that "growing up Mormon" stunts the imaginative portions of the brain. At least I see a
fair demonstration of just that sort of thing here in front of me! How is anybody supposed to respond to such
literalist tempests in literalist teapots????
For demonstration purposes, I have taken one of Dale's marked up Book of Mormon pages (page 374 in the 1830 Book of Mormon;
Alma) and separated the so-called word-strings as he designated himself by underlining. Because it would be
too long--owing to the fact that Dale's strings are so short--I have decided to do one paragraph on that page.
After breaking up the word-strings as Dale had underlined them, I searched for them in Spalding's MS at
Dale's site--
http://solomonspalding.com/SRP/MEDIA/ob.htmHere I found that many of the word-strings were really several independent phrases put together in longer
strings. Dale acknowledged this at the bottom of the above link.
Not just at the bottom of some far-off web, page ----- but right here in this thread, Dan. Remember? It was
not that long ago. I can recite to you what I already said, if that is necessary. I said that in html coding I am
unable to duplicate the double underscoring, indicating OVERLAPPING STRINGS, produced by the word-processor
program which I used to make the underlined words in the color-coded Alma web-page? ---- Remember now,
Dan? I also said that the strings you see in that web-page were
not the sum-total of the ones used to
create the red column chart.
Remember now, Dan? The underlinings in that Alma txt web-page are SUPPLEMENTAL -- no computation of
their occurrence went into the vocabulary overlap percentage given at the top of each Alma page? Recall
my saying that, now Dan???? The vocabulary overlaps have no direct relationship with the underlining.
OK? Do you understand now?
Dan wrote:Dale also gives an example and explains--
And it = common Spalding word group ubiquitous in English texts
came to pass = "came to"/"to pass" (two adjacent Spalding word groups)
Since Dale acknowledged that words like "And it" are "ubiquitous", I have labeled it and other similar with "ubiquitous" in my analysis below. Phrases that were not found in Spalding are followed by 0, or "not found" followed by a breakdown into smaller units that are found in Spalding--e.g., "they should/perform their/their labor". When a phrase appears only once, I have included the page number in parentheses.
And it = ubiquitous
came [to] = found
to pass = found
that they did = not found; "that they/they did"
set guards = 0
over the = found
prisoners of the = found (170)
Lamanites, and did = 0
compel them to = found (154)
go forth and = 0
bury their dead; = found (153)
yea, = 0
and also = ubiquitous (101)
the dead = found
of the = ubiquitous
Nephites = 0
which were slain; = not found; "which were/were slain"
and Moroni placed men = 0
over them to guard them = not found; "over them/to guard them"
while = 0
they should perform their labors. = not found; "they should/perform their/their labor"
And Moroni = 0
went to the city of
Mulek with Lehi, = 0
and took = found (146)
command of the city and gave it = not found; "command of the/of the city and/and gave/gave it"
unto Lehi. Now behold this Lehi = 0
was a = ubiquitous
man who had been = not found; "men who/who had been"
with Moroni = 0
in the more =not found; "in the/the more"
part of all his = not found; "part of/of all his"
battles; = 0
and he was a man = not found; "and he was/was a/a man"
like unto Moroni; = 0
and they = ubiquitous
rejoiced = 0
in each other's = not found; "in each/each other's"
safety; yea, = 0
they were = ubiquitous
beloved by = 148
each other, = found
and also = ubiquitous
beloved by all the people of = not found; "beloved by/by all/all the/the people of"
Nephi. = 0
And it came to pass = same as above
that = 0
after the = found
Lamanites = 0
had finished = found (152)
burying their dead, = not found; "burying the dead" (151)
and also = ubiquitous
the dead = found
of the = ubiquitous
Nephites, = 0
they were = ubiquitous
marched back = 0
into the land = not found; "to the land" (32, 33)
Bountiful; and Teancum, = 0
by the orders of = not found; "by the/the orders of"
Moroni, caused = 0
that they should commence = not found; "that they should/should commence"
laboring in digging a ditch round = 0
about the land, = not found; "about the/the land"
or the city = not found; "or the/the city"
Bountiful; = 0
and he =ubiquitous
caused = 0
that they should = ubiquitous
build a = found
breastwork = 0
of = ubiquitous
timbers = not found; "timber"
upon the = ubiquitous
inner = 0
bank of the = "bank of the river"
ditch; = 0
and they = ubiquitous
cast up = "cast up his eyes" (125)
I must confess that I'm of a similar mind to Brent.
"Truth is mighty and shall prevail," I've heard it said.
Dan wrote:I have trouble when Dale breaks up units that are clearly meant to go together-- like "and it came to pass"
and "in the more part". One of the most common word-strings in the BOM--"and it came to pass"--is not
found in Spalding. So should we be impressed that Dale can find and/it/came to/to pass on various
pages?
So then, Dan, tell me --- where did I ever say that I used either of those two words strings, to accomplish
anything, other than give an example? Do those sorts of minor, accidental parallels enter into my lists and
calculations? If so, not as any major part of my work. If so, only for purposes of my being a little more
complete in making those sorts of lists, where I'd be criticized for having "left stuff out" if I did not include such
trivia. Remember my grandmother and the wrongly dated signature? In a stack of legal papers a half-inch
high, that insignificant mark was what the lawyers pointed to, when they said "Sorry, you're out of luck."
That seems to be your method here too, Dan. You take the underlinings on a web-page wherein the word-strings
do not even enter into the purpose and calculations of that page, and then concentrate upon a trivial detail
that you find bothersome, in order to present the illusion of having found the crack in the House of Usher!
Dan wrote:I would suggest that its absence is far more significant than Dale's questionable methodology. Dale has
essentially stacked the deck in his favor. He is comparing a few Book of Mormon chapters against Spalding's entire MS.
Should we be surprised that he finds a higher vocabulary correspondence when the two authors are discussing
the same subject in a novelistic way? I fail to see the significance of this methodology.
Whatever are you talking about? Do you even know, Dan? My suggestion to you, was for you to take 500
shared Spalding/Book of Mormon word-strings of your own choice, and to chart them out all across the expanse of the
Book of Mormon text, to
SEE WHAT PATTERNS THEY PRODUCE ---- And then, after you have made that determination,
then repeat the test, with an additional 500 other shared word-strings of your choice. My prediction is that the
PATTERNS of distribution will be very similar, in the outcomes for each test. And I also predict that those
PATTERNS will closely match the ones I have already demonstrated, with a major Spalding cluster in the
latter third of Alma, and a few minor clusters elsewhere.
So --- what is the purpose of doing all of that? The purpose is to delimit the sections of the Book of Mormon which most
resemble Spalding's known fiction-writing language, so that we can give people a fair chance of consulting
the correct part of that book, in order to see why the old witnesses said it read like Spalding's fiction.
THAT is the purpose, Dan. THAT is step #2 in about a ten-step process.
So, what do you do? You look at a single paragraph, and say "Nope, no elephants here -- we must not be in
Africa yet!" Your sample is interesting to me, however -- because it demonstrates the sort of word-strings I
purpposely LEFT OUT of my red column chart calculations.
See below, for the entire page 374, with your additions marked "Dan." That is, I inserted a few of your "finds."
Now, take a step back and look at the whole page, to see what sort of word-strings I made use of in giving it
a high rating, as being "Spaldingish."
218 . JACOB was
determined to slay them and cut his way through
307 . cut his way through
to the city of MULEK
249 . they fought on both hands
with exceeding fury
282 . MORONI
was wounded and JACOB was killed
181 .
the remainder of them, being much confused, knew not whither
249 . pressed upon their rear
with such fury... that
250 . LEHI
pressed upon their rear
with such fury
352 . and
the remainder of them... knew not whither to go
007 . chief captains...
threw down their weapons of war
026 .
that they should do the same
037 .
their chief captains, all those who were not slain
332 . threw down their weapons of war
at the feet of MORONI
451 . that
when the LAMANITES had heard these words
240 .
they were compelled to march with their brethren
094 . they were compelled
to march with their brethren
263 . And now
the number of prisoners who were taken
385 .
the number of those who had been slain
263 . who were taken exceeded more than
the number of
Dan . And it
came to pass
Dan . And it came
to pass
Dan . did set guards
over the
106 . did set guards over the
prisoners of the LAMANITES
Dan .
compel them to go forth
286 . compel them
to go forth and
bury their dead
Dan .
the dead of the NEPHITES
298 .
the dead of the NEPHITES
who were slain
Dan .
and took command of the city
040 . MORONI... took
command of the city and
gave it
unto LEHI
257 .
and also
beloved by all
the people of NEPHI
307 . And MORONI
went to the city of MULEK
Dan .
beloved by each other
431 . they were beloved by
each other, and also beloved by
Dan .
beloved by all the people of
432 . and
they rejoiced in
each other's safety
292 . the LAMANITES had finished
burying their dead
Dan .
had finished burying their dead,
Dan . also
the dead of the Nephites
Dan . by
the orders of Moroni
389 . TEANCUM, by
the orders of MORONI, caused that they should
026 .
that they should commence laboring in digging
402 . that
they should commence laboring in digging a ditch
Dan . upon the inner
bank of the ditch
Dan . and they
cast up dirt
See this web-page for an explanation of the 3-digit numbers on the left:
http://solomonspalding.com/SRP/MEDIA/BookSol3.htm
Dale