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Re: Response to Jockers, Criddle, et al., Now Available

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Dale,

If Oliver Cowdery was the theologian who altered the italicized
words in the KJV text copied into the Nephite Record, then I
suppose we should be able to discern a concomitant theologizing
going on in Oliver's articles in the early Mormon newspapers, etc.

Another possibility is that the alterations of the italicized words in
copied biblical passages were made on the spur of the moment, as
the text was being copied, and thus not due to a concerted effort
to insert Mormon "corrections" into the KJV text.


You should know that most of the Isaiah chapters in the Book of Mormon are not extant for the dictated MS. It is possible that Joseph Smith corrected the Isaiah text through his stone after he returned, or that he wrote them in a Bible (similar to the Inspired Version Bible) before he left.
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MCB wrote:Another a-prefixed verb in II Nephi.

27:32 and they that a make a man an offender for a word, and lay a snare for him that reproveth in the gate, and turn aside the just for a thing of nought. 



Sorry about that -- it's my transcribal error -- I'll fix the problem
next time I upload the text:

http://premormon.com/resources/r009/2Nephi-CP.htm#098a

The proper "a"-prefixed verbs will probably be present participles --
that is, those with an "ing" ending.

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Dan Vogel wrote:...It is possible
....


Unfortunately these "possibilities" stack up as unresolved problems
which may never be answered to our full satisfaction.

The simplest explanations may generally be the correct ones, in
terms of actual historical events. However, now and then, there
may be instances in which complex, convoluted explanations best
articulate and differentiate these historical "possibilities."

The easiest/simplest explanation that I can come up with, is that
the changes in the italicized words conform to early Mormon tenets
and practices, and that they were predetermined prior to the
dictation (if those parts of the text were indeed dictated).

If the theologizing occurred AFTER Oliver first wrote down the
biblical passages, then I suppose that erasures, cross-outs,
insertions, etc., occurred in the manuscript text before it was
duplicated, to create the document used by the printers.

Although this is a less simple explanation, it has the attraction of
corresponding, somewhat, to how the BoC chapter texts were
altered, when reproduced in the D&C, and to how other early Mormon
documents were sometimes altered after-the-fact.

I'll leave it to the historians and textual analysts to make the final
determination. In the meanwhile, I'll rely upon the seemingly
most simple explanation as my provisional viewpoint on the matter.

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Uncle Dale wrote:

Sorry about that -- it's my transcribal error -- I'll fix the problem
next time I upload the text:

http://premormon.com/resources/r009/2Nephi-CP.htm#098a

The proper "a"-prefixed verbs will probably be present participles --
that is, those with an "ing" ending.

UD

Yeah-- it may be a printer's error.
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MCB,

As I note in the quote (that I wrote elsewhere) at the end of this post, it is essential, because we could lose information in the process. Everything should support everything else, and evidence to the contrary should be explainable.

The different participants had different motivations. And this shows in the multiple differing theologies and ethical teachings within the book. That is the reason why the participants split off in different directions.

Time will tell.


I suspect time will show your methodology is fraught with insurmountable obstacles and untenable assumptions, the least of which is that different theologies indicate different authorship. This is assuming you correctly interpret authorial intent of various passages, for it is doubtful that believers in the book see competing theologies in it. Regardless, such things do not necessarily point to multiple authors. It can just as easily point to a single author attempting to unite disparate views in his potential audience. The Book of Mormon’s mediatory nature has been noted, and I have suggested it fit Joseph Smith personality and family dynamics. Besides, Mormonism isn’t unusual in its syncretic amalgam of theology; this tendency has been seen the world’s great religions. Those who have studied Joseph Smith’s theology over his entire lifetime have been struck by the apparent contradictions and unresolved tensions between competing concepts.

Splitting off of Rigdon and Cowdery? Rigdon didn’t split off until after Joseph Smith died, mostly because of BY not because of differing interpretations of Book of Mormon theology. Cowdery and the Whitmers were cut off by the High Council in Missouri because of differences of opinion about policies, not about theology. Regardless, the assertion that these men left the church because of differing theologies is not evidence that they were responsible for said theologies being present in the Book of Mormon. This is a non-sequitur.

I don’t think removing the KJV language in a book whose author is intentionally imitating that language will help. Actually, the possibility exists that the language in the Book of Mormon is influenced by Quaker speech as well. Showing uneven distribution of errors rests on the assumption that such things have to be consistent for there to have been a single author. I don’t think this is necessarily true.
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MCB wrote:Another a-prefixed verb in II Nephi.

27:32 and they that a make a man an offender for a word, and lay a snare for him that reproveth in the gate, and turn aside the just for a thing of nought. 


I couldn't find "a make" in Printer's MS or 1830 Book of Mormon, and Dictated MS is not extant?
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Dan Vogel wrote:
MCB wrote:Another a-prefixed verb in II Nephi.

27:32 and they that a make a man an offender for a word, and lay a snare for him that reproveth in the gate, and turn aside the just for a thing of nought. 


I couldn't find "a make" in Printer's MS or 1830 Book of Mormon, and Dictated MS is not extant?


Well that settles it. I am using http://www.2think.org/hundredsheep/bom1830/alma.shtml
It must be an error there. Thank you. You obviously have more resources than I have. :)

I can't respond to your previous post right now. My laptop is running too many things at one time. I may have to shut down everything except what I am currently working on.
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MCB wrote:...
Yeah-- it may be a printer's error.


No -- not a printer's error -- but actually a transcription error.
I have an 1830 Book of Mormon, plus Skousen's list of variations in published
1830 volumes. If I had more time, stamina (and assistance), perhaps
I could produce a perfect transcription of the 1830 Palmyra text.

But, I can only do so much.

If you continue looking through the on-line transcription, you may
discover a few more instances of the "a"-prefixed verbs. I hope so.

As I said earlier, use of this sort of language is not known from
the preserved utterances/writings of Pratt, Smith or Cowdery.
Only Rigdon is known to have used the "a-going" type of language --
at least once in his correspondence and at least once in his son's
quotation of his speech.

That does not mean that Cowdery or Smith (or even Spalding)
might/might not have used the "a-going" vernacular now and then.

Matching the Jockers authorship attributions to the "a-going"
language, there is no clear-cut evidence of a single, uniform
authorship. Nor do we discern any immediate reason for the
pattern of distribution. Criddle speculates that Mosiah and the
"small plates" received a final editorial inspection, through which
the "a"-prefixed verbs and other crudities were removed. I do not
know how viable his conclusion might be.

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Well, I have just reached Mosiah. Haven't found much in II Nephi, Jacob, or the one-chapter books. I Nephi was rich with errors. II Nephi and Jacob, with Biblical material wouldn't have much.

I'm shutting down my browser now to speed up 'puter.
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Dan:

Thanks for your responses.

This is what does not make sense to me. You made a compelling case in American Apocrypha that the eyewitnesses changed their testimony over time, sometimes drastically. Why then, would you put so much stock in what they testify to?

All the best.


I don't recall having argued that?


It's always dangerous to summarize what you think an author wrote. And it has admittedly been a while since I read it. I assume you do recall the chapter to which I am referring? If the implication is that my summation of the chapter you wrote in American Apocrypha is not accurate, then I truly wonder how you would summarize it as contrasted with what I wrote? Surely you're not suggesting that the Book of Mormon witnesses' testimony did not change over time? What am I missing?

Why should we conclude the eyewitness testimony is reliable


My answer is different than Dale’s. I would paraphrase David Hume’s statement on miracles: pick the lesser miracle.


Which, as a general rule I would agree with. I think the case of the Book of Mormon is rather exceptional.

Given the repeated and multiple eyewitness testimony maintained over decades, it would require a greater conspiracy to maintain a lesser speculated conspiracy. So which is easier to believe: the witnesses were telling the truth, or that they were involved in a massive conspiracy? What would Occum’s Razor have you choose? How many assumptions are needed to maintain the Spalding theory? Why replace a simple straightforward theory, for one so convoluted and ad hoc?


The short answer is because the simple, straightforward theory does not explain the data as well as the more complex one does. Of course Occam's razor tells us to choose the simplicity of Smith-alone over the complexity of S/R. But Occam's razor, like the pirate's code, is more of a guideline than a hard, fast rule.

in my opinion, the greater conspiracy you suggest is overblown and often caricatured in order to more easily refute. In the first place, conspiracies do happen, even in contrast with what would otherwise be a simpler explanation. So to rule out conspiracy in the case of the Book of Mormon on that basis alone is naïve. In the second place, there are different types of conspiracies. I am not of the opinion that, if there was a Book of Mormon "conspiracy" it happened because a few fellows got together with the goal of starting a new church by the introduction of fraudulent scripture. I think the various conspirators were in it for various reasons but those reasons converged and each man's self interest kept it alive. And I don't believe any of them thought the new scripture they were introducing to the world was fraudulent. And in the third place, what you are suggesting with regard to KJVB plagiarism is itself a conspiracy to not divulge that information.

The theory was spawned by those trying to remember what they head read fifteen years earlier. Obviously, the Book of Mormon witnesses’ testimony is much stronger than that kind of testimony.


Why? Because it was closer to the events?

The theory was spawned by those who believed they had heard the same thing before. The Conneaut (and subsequent) witnesses were either flat out lying or they were telling the truth. The notion, per Brodie, that they only thought they were telling the truth, is untenable in light of what they actually stated in comparison to the Book of Mormon and Manuscript Story Conneaut Creek.

With regard to how many assumptions are needed to maintain S/R, interestingly enough, at least one key assumption has recently found documentary support in the form of the mail-waiting notice. I suspect more of the same is out there. One way S/R could be refuted is by producing a pre-1830 timeline for Smith, Rigdon and Cowdery that does not allow time for them to have been at the same place at the same time. While the picture is not complete, what we find instead are multiple opportunities.

I'm pretty sure Dan agrees with his co-author David Wright that whoever produced the Book of Mormon plagiarized from the KJVB. I agree, but acknowledging that is to reject the eyewitness testimony Dan is otherwise relying on …

Why should we conclude the eyewitness testimony is reliable when they claim every word was dictated by Smith and yet unreliable when it comes to KJVB plagiarism or even when measuring their former words against their own later words?


This is a natural question asked many times, and answered. The answer I usually give is that Whitmer’s description of the translation process was in response to claims about Spalding’s manuscript being used. Whitmer’s answer therefore is limited to that issue and does not preclude the possibility that he also saw Joseph Smith and OC using the KJV as a translation aid, or transcription shortcut. I believe it’s possible that Cowdery copied directly the longest block from Isaiah when Joseph Smith and others were away in Palmyra in early June 1829 making arrangements with Grandin to print the book. Regardless, there would be no need for the eyewitnesses to mention this in their descriptions of the translation process since strictly speaking it was not how Joseph Smith translated.


But this is a remarkable concession. What you are suggesting is itself a conspiracy not to divulge key information that would otherwise conflict with the official testimonies you suggest are more reliable than those from Conneaut. Why do you thus conclude? Apparently on the basis that it was merely a trivial detail not worth mentioning! That's certainly generous, but hardly water-tight. If Cowdery, Smith and Whitmer could simply forget to mention that a King James Bible was used in Book of Mormon production then what is to prevent them from forgetting to mention other sources that may also have been used?

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