The data is not mine. I do not have a searchable 1830 Book of Mormon text. Instead of making this an us against them thing, why can't we work together on this? Do you have or have access to a searchable 1830 Book of Mormon text? If so, I'm sure you can find hundreds of patterns, some of which may negate what I see in Dale's chart.
Sorry, but I’m going to make you work. Apparently, all you have is Dale’s chart. You can’t even give examples of the redundant “that”. If you don’t have Signature Book’s CD, which has an 1830 Book of Mormon searchable text that I created myself, try the following (I’m sure there are others):
http://www.2think.org/hundredsheep/bom1830/inep.shtml
I do not know what patterns will emerge at this point, other than the limited information I have seen which includes the data in Dale's chart. So it is entirely possible that you could come up with patterns that are fairly evenly distributed across the entire text.
There is no data in Dale’s chart.
My reason for wanting to focus on error patterns or colloquialisms, is based on the common sense logic that whoever is using a particular error or speech pattern is likely doing so subconsciously and is therefore not likely to vary the usage in so striking a pattern as can clearly be seen in Dale's chart where, under Nephi priority (for Glenn) it appears frequently at the beginning then drops off entirely and then comes back again at the end; or, under Mosiah priority (for the rest of us) it is non-existent and then appears frequently.
I haven’t seen any examples of the redundant “that” in the Book of Mormon. There may be more opportunities for it to appear in rhetorical situations than in historical narrative. I’m not sure until I get a better understanding of what Dale thinks is a redundant “that”.
First, I appreciate that you are at least thinking about it now. I realize that Metcalfe wasn't postulating different authors and that his interpretation of the evidence is an obvious shift in preference by the same author. The reason for the shift in preference, however, is unclear. For some reason, Joseph Smith simply decided to start using wherefore over therefore. I am suggesting that an unintended conclusion of Metcalfe's observation is simply more than one author. In that case, the shift does not represent a consistent change in usage by one author based on a hypothetical change in preference, but rather the work of more than one author.
The reason I think they follow a similar pattern is clear... just look at the chart! The frequency of "wherefore" occurs at high levels at the beginning and end of the text, but not in the middle. Same thing for the redundant that.
My suggestion is that with each new piece of data that is added to the mix and conforms to a similar pattern, the more difficult it is to explain the data as a shift in preference by one author. Your author must shift his preferences for a number of phrases and words (some of which appear to be unconscious errors) at the same general location in the text and he then goes on to consistently follow the new preferences in each instance.
Your assumption might be wrong, especially with someone in their formative years as a writer. Even seasoned writers can change preferences. In fact, it takes effort to stay out of comfortable ruts. You also need to explain why the same shift occurs in Joseph Smith’s revelations.
That's a fair observation and I think I agree with it. That would seem to support the notion that Rigdon and/or Smith/Cowdery was adding much of the religious material while Spalding's ideas (or at least something other than Smith/Cowdery) served as the historical framework--but this would not be very obvious until we come out of the 116 page replacement section since that section was totally re-written. That seems to be what we are seeing in Dale's chart. It is noteworthy that Spalding never uses the phrase "wherefore" and, beginning in the Book of Mormon section coming out of the rewrite--the first section that would represent the fewest redactions between us and Spalding, wherefore drops off and therefore becomes dominant.
Do you have a better explanation?
I’ve only given a preliminary explanation; I can’t go any further until I get more information. Your speculation goes way too far with so little data—data that you apparently don’t understand completely yourself.
If I had a searchable 1830 Book of Mormon text and some time, I could look for the distribution of errors--or patterns of speech--such as the "a going" phrase or the "them for those" substitutions. As it is, I do not.
The one online I gave above has current versification, which is extremely helpful.