Bret Ripley wrote: ↑Sat Feb 08, 2025 6:26 pm
Everybody Wang Chung wrote: ↑Sat Feb 08, 2025 5:53 pm
Dr. Shades,
If you could spare a minute, we would love an update on the project.
"It was a dark and stormy night. Suddenly, young Lou Midgley's bedroom was illuminated by a flash of lightning. His eyes shot open as he startled awake from a fitful sleep, with the voice he had heard in his dream still echoing in his ears: 'someone, somewhere, is sinning.' Lou would sleep no more that night."
Lol! That would make a great opening paragraph for Dr. Shade's book.
Here are a few opening sentences that Dr. Shades could consider to grab people's attention:
- "How 13 crows managed to lift a twenty-pound baby Midgley into the air was beyond his mother's comprehension, but as Midgley grew into a man, that was certainly the least of her worries.”
- "It was the day Midgley's prostrate exploded."
- "It can hardly be a coincidence that no language on earth has ever produced the expression ‘As smart as a Mopologist'."
- "Midgley had been called many things since joining the Interpreter Foundation, but until now no one had actually compared him to Satan."
- "'Where's Papa going with that axe?' said an adolescent Midgely to his mother as they were setting the table for breakfast."
- "Midgley was born twice: first, as a baby girl, on a remarkably smog less Chicago day in January of 1930; and then again, as a teenage boy, in an emergency room near Casper, Wyoming in September of 1914."
"I'm on paid sabbatical from BYU in exchange for my promise to use this time to finish two books."
Daniel C. Peterson, 2014